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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love Cake! yum! anyway ...Jermaine is so cute i can tell he's perfect for both of them! I can tell!..or maby not not.but it was really sad that Ro did that to him. sniff sniff...can't wait for the next chapter!
p.s. I totally hug ya back!
p.s. I totally hug ya back!
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this so far. it's very different. i'd like to see where you're going to take this so please finish it.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start.....waiting for more!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, the second chap ticked off!
And I liked it! You had no reason to feel nervous about! It was really good, Ro and Ry's initial banter turning into something more serious. I loved it when Ro woke up all flushed from the dream (judging by the evidence, a wet one, hihihi) and when Ry started teasing him about it. It's interesting to observe the differences between the "brothers" - or are they? Hmmm ... who are they really? I know, two personalities trapped in one body, but what's the genesis? I'm really curious how they came to be in one body. Are they "brothers" like Ry pointed out?
Plus, that got me curious, Ro's reaction to Len, and Ry's reaction to Ro's reaction. It's clearly visible how different is their attitude towards the matters of sexuality and sex, too. Ro wants romantic feelings - and he clearly liked Len, while Ry is the more sex concerned personality. And he wants? Hihihi, I guess I know, but we will discuss it in more detail later ^__^
Yes, the last line was perfect!
Overall, a very good chap, and as usual, I want to continue reading. Thanks for updating today!
teeta
And I liked it! You had no reason to feel nervous about! It was really good, Ro and Ry's initial banter turning into something more serious. I loved it when Ro woke up all flushed from the dream (judging by the evidence, a wet one, hihihi) and when Ry started teasing him about it. It's interesting to observe the differences between the "brothers" - or are they? Hmmm ... who are they really? I know, two personalities trapped in one body, but what's the genesis? I'm really curious how they came to be in one body. Are they "brothers" like Ry pointed out?
Plus, that got me curious, Ro's reaction to Len, and Ry's reaction to Ro's reaction. It's clearly visible how different is their attitude towards the matters of sexuality and sex, too. Ro wants romantic feelings - and he clearly liked Len, while Ry is the more sex concerned personality. And he wants? Hihihi, I guess I know, but we will discuss it in more detail later ^__^
Yes, the last line was perfect!
Overall, a very good chap, and as usual, I want to continue reading. Thanks for updating today!
teeta
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA ok I'll eat! I kind of wonder what happened when they were asleep. I feel bad though...will he ever be able to date anyone? it kind of seems like they'll never be happy...#cries# Blah! update soon!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far... could evolve into something really good.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Long time no see!
Anyway ...
The first chap has blown my head off! It's great to read about one body housing two VERY different personalities, with their own tastes, attitudes and even having a diferent opinions about well, things. Like masturbation :p
Definitely, you started a story which I am going to follow! It made me so curious! And all the possibilities it presents! Yay! I can't wait for the continuation!
Thanks for chap 1 and see you in chap 2!
*hugs* teeta
Anyway ...
The first chap has blown my head off! It's great to read about one body housing two VERY different personalities, with their own tastes, attitudes and even having a diferent opinions about well, things. Like masturbation :p
Definitely, you started a story which I am going to follow! It made me so curious! And all the possibilities it presents! Yay! I can't wait for the continuation!
Thanks for chap 1 and see you in chap 2!
*hugs* teeta
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is so cute! and that happens to me all the time! I never agree with my self! I totally hate eating! Ha! write more please!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this beginning much more than I thought I would. You set up the personalities Ro and Ry nicely. However I am a bit confused. Is Rory just the container? Will he have thoughts and feeling?