schedule
July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot idea but yes the typos made it difficult for me to read. I would like to see you continue this story!
schedule
June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a good start, but I think your fics can be better. Try writing in paragraph form. AFF also has some excellent writing tips under "info/support"