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by Lindsay

person Kryst Sutures
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much! Interesting setting and characters. Salem is a horny bastard indeed. I've got to admit, though, I can't wait for some sex to happen. But the story is so good that I'm not even thinking about the dirty stuff that much. I'm amazed that this doesn't have more reviews; it's very good. Can't wait to see more.
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY FOR THE UPDATE!!!! i hope that kiernan didn't have anything to do with salem ending up here, and i think lucius is sweet. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
ASOTA
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really loving this so far.
Can't wait for more!
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS TO SALEM!!!!
ASOTA
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nicei like this story and am glad u updated
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story! i hope you keep it up and i can't wait to see where it's going!
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been part of AF for a while now and have never "reviewed" a story. But yours I just had to; this is an awesome one and I hope that you will continue it. You are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your works.
person Faust
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep on writing. Good story, I love Salem's sense of humor.
person Berlin
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you keep writing this story... it really deserves more reviews than it has thus far. ;)

To me, it's moving a little slow right now, but it's so well written & I really can't wait to see where it goes!
person IamM
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far, I love the setting and the characters, most of all I love the first person point of view, it's nice to read something different than the usual third person. Hope you can update whenever you find the time.