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i bet you that the visitor is his brother, just because it would add a kink in the plot and don probably won't let him in, but kiernan would just find a way to sneak in and then a 'scene' would ensue! duh duh DUH!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
ASOTA

Loved the chapter! Yeah, it has a different feel to it, but it's all good! Glad to see you back!! Promise you won't be gone so long before your next visit! I missed your story and kept wondering what was going at the mental coop!

Chapter 14

Best chapter yet!!! Loved it!!!! Feels like we're getting somewhere!!!
The place IS insane!!! Unfortunately, you describe it pretty much how
I imagine it!!!! Yikes!!!

Thanks!
R

W00000TTT!!!! This is getting sooooo good!!! >__<

I can't wait to read more of this! Fantastic job! :P

The last chapter really was Awesome!!! Don't worry ok? LOL! ^^

Thanks again for the great chapter! I loved it! *hugs*

Finally, you have no idea how long I've been silently stalking this story and praying for a new chapter. Lucius is one of the most interesting characters so far, I also instantly took a liking to Hayley. Thank you for this, I can't wait to read more

Chapter13

Still lovin' this story!!! Am a sucker for the institutionalized!!
Love the mystery of 'why' those kids are in there.

Some communities just have a place like that for families to house
their kids 'till they're 18. Out of sight- out of mind and all that!!!

Better for the kids? Who's to say! (Well, you can 'cause your writing this!)

Thanks,
R

thanks for updating! yay....group therapy
ASOTA

this story is amazing and i still think there's more to be learned about what really went down between the golden child and salem. interesting to see the development of the relationships with everybody and how salem is learning not to be such an ass. i wonder if there are secrets about the institution that we don't know yet either. why such the heavy reliance on medicine for the kids if the doc seems young and understanding? what happened between salem falling asleep and waking up a week later? hmm??
i'm really looking forward to the rest! :)

So, I'm really interested in reading more of this, but it's been about six months since the last update. Do you think we can expect you to finish it? I would love it if you would, I was just getting into the rhythm of it when you stopped. Cheers!

damn, that's really fucked up. to think that his parents care so little about him to institutionalize him for something he didn't start is messed up. did they even kinda punish the Older brother? probebly not. just blamed it on our Salem. then that phone call! what a total cunt! I so hope he gets outta there and kicks their asses! then that letter he got from his friend~!? did he really write it or was it faked? you never know. someone as rick as his parents were and with such negative feelings towards him, I wouldn't put it past them to have it forged. and lucious is weird. and I like Danny. please update soon! X)