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December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy I've found this fic again!
But it seems it's been a little while since you have last updated...I hope you haven't decided to discontinue the story.
I really enjoy the interactions that Salem has with everyone in West Wood; and I really want to know what's going on with the
medication conspiracy he thinks he's found!
I hope to see an update for Institutionalized up sometime soon. Till then, I'll be waiting patiently for another chapter!
But it seems it's been a little while since you have last updated...I hope you haven't decided to discontinue the story.
I really enjoy the interactions that Salem has with everyone in West Wood; and I really want to know what's going on with the
medication conspiracy he thinks he's found!
I hope to see an update for Institutionalized up sometime soon. Till then, I'll be waiting patiently for another chapter!
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November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is always interesting. I'm still waiting to see what this place is all about.
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I felt bad when Salem found out about Kieran's girlfriend, I don't know why, cause Kieran seems like a jerk to me, but the way you wrote it made me feel what Salem was feeling at the moment. I think he's just jelous that he isn't the only special person to his brother, so he really isn't in love, but I don't know. I like the scene with Lucius, very sweet =D.
I also think that all mental institutions aren't 100% ethical, I mean, nothing in this world is 100% of anything, so I guess Salem is just paranoid hehe, well, maybe not.
Anyway, keep writing!
I also think that all mental institutions aren't 100% ethical, I mean, nothing in this world is 100% of anything, so I guess Salem is just paranoid hehe, well, maybe not.
Anyway, keep writing!
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October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! A new chapter!
I'm so exited! It looks like it's getting somewhere! We get to know more of the characters and I love it!
I do not see why you think that this chapter doesn't flow well... 'cause I think that It's perfect as it is!
The kiss was cute even if it was awkward for those two in the end! LOL
Please do not give up on this sorry! It's fabulous work!! and I can't wait to read more of it! *hugs*
Thanks!
I'm so exited! It looks like it's getting somewhere! We get to know more of the characters and I love it!
I do not see why you think that this chapter doesn't flow well... 'cause I think that It's perfect as it is!
The kiss was cute even if it was awkward for those two in the end! LOL
Please do not give up on this sorry! It's fabulous work!! and I can't wait to read more of it! *hugs*
Thanks!
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
strange story but still interesting enough that i wanna find out what happens in the end
this place would make the most levelheaded person insane lol
this place would make the most levelheaded person insane lol
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still quite interesting :o i want to know what happened to him D:
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am totally addicted to this story! I am a psychology major so it really peeks my interest, i also like the stories behind every character. I can't help but wonder if Lucius is going to get together with Salem in some sort of masochistic way? Keep up the good work!
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you're being a bit harsh on yourself because I really liked the chapter, I was hoping to see more interaction between Salem and Lucius, and that's what I got. I'd like to know what happened to Salem in the D-Lot room, though, and if Kieran is going to visit him soon =).
Anyhow, I guess we all are our biggest critics right? I mean, I've written 5 drafts I hate and keep hating of the book I'm trying to write. But let me tell you that I truly enjoy your story,
Anyhow, I guess we all are our biggest critics right? I mean, I've written 5 drafts I hate and keep hating of the book I'm trying to write. But let me tell you that I truly enjoy your story,
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, I cringe every time I read about Salem cutting himself. I can't imagine ever doing that; well, I can't stand needles, so I never would! It must feel horrible, knowing the only control you have over your life, is by cutting yourself.
I wish Salem would learn empathy and sensitivity. He needs to be more sensitive to other people's feelings, namely Lucius. The poor kid just bared his soul, and all Salem did was basically make fun of him.
Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
I wish Salem would learn empathy and sensitivity. He needs to be more sensitive to other people's feelings, namely Lucius. The poor kid just bared his soul, and all Salem did was basically make fun of him.
Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:o interesting.
i'd like to know more about this place that they're in now.
and for the record, smiling doctors and nurses are creepy.
i would like you to continue. I've been waiting for an update :3
i'd like to know more about this place that they're in now.
and for the record, smiling doctors and nurses are creepy.
i would like you to continue. I've been waiting for an update :3