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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really..pretty so far. Good job, i like it. ^-^
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Does any one know if this story was abandoned or not?
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just reread the story, and I love it! Hope it's going well with writing the new chapter.
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodie! Nice to hear you guys are going to try and finish this story....keep up the good work!
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you guys still writing this? I really enjoyed it
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I understand completely. Don't worry about it and take your time writing the new chapter. I've waited this long for an update, I don't mind waiting a little longer for your wonderful writing. ^w^ *huggles*
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Hey, it's me again. I realised you had added another two chapters to the fic and as it was quite a long time since I had last read this I went over it again from the very beginning. I have to say the story hasn't lost any of it's potency, the first, second or third read. I'm willing to bet the future consecutive reads will be just as enjoyable. The vivid imagery continues to stimulate the imagination and the raw power of the characters emotions have a realism that takes my breath away. I'm doing a two chapter review here so I's going to get a little lengthy...
Chapter 10
Firstly, I must say you have an amazing talent for writing down mind-blowing sex.(Love-making in their case...)
The scenes are exquisitely painted out on screen. I have to confess like Tristan did Minori, I'm drooling over this lemon. Four simultaneous climaxes... on his first time too! *blink blink...
Second, I can just see the scene where Minori addresses Tristan's butt... Mua ha ha... *Falls over laughing at the cuteness...
Third, Minori seems to always believe that Tristan will leave him for whatever he does to hurt him. It does illustrate his great attachment to him but also suggests a rather unhealthy paranoia. Is this the intended effect? Because he is sixteen, insecurity and feelings of inadequacy are reasonably probable.
Fourth, as is consistent throughout the entire fic, the relationship between the pair is poignant, heart-warming and sugary sweet. Tristan is always there to reassure Minori and the same is true the other way around.
Chapter 11
First, Tristan doing his lover's hair is just adorable. His constant joy at their proximity to one another is just so adorably sweet.
Second, Minori's communing with his dead mother is intrigueing and I can't help but wonder if his apparent talent is helping Victoria to manifest in Tristan's dreams or his waking hours.
Third, Tristan is an insatiable kitty!
Minori: Leave that alone! Bad kitty! Drop it!
Tristan: Meow?
*Wink Wink, Nudge Nudge...
Ps. why can't Minori purr? You've mentioned his failing to do so more than once...
I love the progress the story has made...
Please update A.S.A.P!
Faeli
Hey, it's me again. I realised you had added another two chapters to the fic and as it was quite a long time since I had last read this I went over it again from the very beginning. I have to say the story hasn't lost any of it's potency, the first, second or third read. I'm willing to bet the future consecutive reads will be just as enjoyable. The vivid imagery continues to stimulate the imagination and the raw power of the characters emotions have a realism that takes my breath away. I'm doing a two chapter review here so I's going to get a little lengthy...
Chapter 10
Firstly, I must say you have an amazing talent for writing down mind-blowing sex.(Love-making in their case...)
The scenes are exquisitely painted out on screen. I have to confess like Tristan did Minori, I'm drooling over this lemon. Four simultaneous climaxes... on his first time too! *blink blink...
Second, I can just see the scene where Minori addresses Tristan's butt... Mua ha ha... *Falls over laughing at the cuteness...
Third, Minori seems to always believe that Tristan will leave him for whatever he does to hurt him. It does illustrate his great attachment to him but also suggests a rather unhealthy paranoia. Is this the intended effect? Because he is sixteen, insecurity and feelings of inadequacy are reasonably probable.
Fourth, as is consistent throughout the entire fic, the relationship between the pair is poignant, heart-warming and sugary sweet. Tristan is always there to reassure Minori and the same is true the other way around.
Chapter 11
First, Tristan doing his lover's hair is just adorable. His constant joy at their proximity to one another is just so adorably sweet.
Second, Minori's communing with his dead mother is intrigueing and I can't help but wonder if his apparent talent is helping Victoria to manifest in Tristan's dreams or his waking hours.
Third, Tristan is an insatiable kitty!
Minori: Leave that alone! Bad kitty! Drop it!
Tristan: Meow?
*Wink Wink, Nudge Nudge...
Ps. why can't Minori purr? You've mentioned his failing to do so more than once...
I love the progress the story has made...
Please update A.S.A.P!
Faeli
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEY! umm truth be told i havent read the whole thing yet... that you have up BUT please please please finish posting it... i know theres more... oh yea this is her friend from texas that visited in july by the way... and umm... i have a suggestion but i dont wanna be rude.. but i think it would be helpful if you did something so that we know point of view was changing like a little ----- or something.... anyways hi again... im looking forward to reading about these two.. and oh yea ive been spreading the link to all the yoai vampire fans i know.... ANYWAYS I LOVE IT
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word describes Tristan right now DUMB
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just have to say that this is very good. I read this and think how I wish I could write with such detail. Everything is so intense, perfect.