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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story is slightly sound and does follow a single straight plot. But I had to stop reading by the third chapter. I don't know how old you are, *obviously over 18, otherwise you wouldn't be on this site*, but it seems that the ability to spell properly and use all those lovely spelling and writing skills to make a story good, are abilities and skills that you do not possess. I would suggest getting a writing program with a spell checker and just, see if you can fix up and repost this story, make it better to read, if you're at all interested in doing so.
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You rule Jinggles. I really like this one. I hope you get over your writers block soon. Just hit me up for help and ideas if you need 'em!
~Briar~
~Briar~