schedule
August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good.. please continue this and make the chapters longer ... pleaseeeeeeee update soon
schedule
July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good start! It isn't very often where a reader can see the same scene from two points-of-view. Even rarer still, you've done it so that it is clear and concise, without any confusion. Please continue...
Linda
Linda