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by AnaisWannabe

schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was just absolutely facinating! (Only you, LJ, only you, would call this "facinating" *shakes head*)

Anyway, enough of the third person self-rebuke. I really did love this. Sexy, absolutely, but it was also captivating in a very different way. The emotions were just fantastic and so, so... real. The characters were wonderful, too. Are you planning on using them again? You really should.

They're lovely.

Thank you so much for this wonderful read. This will stay with me for awhile; perfect is the only true adjective I can use to describe it.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soo thought that was a girl untill the lady came on the train. THis was great.

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