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schedule
April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude I really love this story, good start, don't care about the grammatical errors, no one's perfect, hope you continue this dude, don't see much slime girl fiction in this site...
schedule
January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree.
schedule
August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent start, though there were a few grammatical errors, otherwise update soon!