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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK, so I just finished the 64 chapters for this. I wanted to finish it before I made an opinion on it.
I DID enjoy it! Let me say that first. Otherwise I would not have finished it. The storyline was good. The pairings were great.
A problem I had was that the rape with Chaz was played down too much. I dont want to preach to you but rape is rape. Chaz's friends said something along the lines of 'well if you had communicated with him he wouldn't have gone so far'. That's pretty much saying your partially to blame in the situation, and that should never had been said especially by a friend. And for later Chaz to actually feel that to be true is even worse. He could have been parading in front of ash naked 24 hours of the day and Ash's actions shouldn't have been acceptable. No mater what the reason his actions weren't justifiable. The fact that they all believed that because Chaz avoided talking to him that it's partially his fault is just ridiculous. I think if you wanted Ash to play the bad guy, but later have him accepted as an ok character that chaz can continue to be in a band with, maybe rape wasn't the way to go. Just my opinion.
As far as writing, it wasn't as descriptive as I would have wanted. Like another reviewer said the sex scenes could have been written out. It would definitely be a better read with descriptive steamy sexy scenes.
Now on to the sequel...
I DID enjoy it! Let me say that first. Otherwise I would not have finished it. The storyline was good. The pairings were great.
A problem I had was that the rape with Chaz was played down too much. I dont want to preach to you but rape is rape. Chaz's friends said something along the lines of 'well if you had communicated with him he wouldn't have gone so far'. That's pretty much saying your partially to blame in the situation, and that should never had been said especially by a friend. And for later Chaz to actually feel that to be true is even worse. He could have been parading in front of ash naked 24 hours of the day and Ash's actions shouldn't have been acceptable. No mater what the reason his actions weren't justifiable. The fact that they all believed that because Chaz avoided talking to him that it's partially his fault is just ridiculous. I think if you wanted Ash to play the bad guy, but later have him accepted as an ok character that chaz can continue to be in a band with, maybe rape wasn't the way to go. Just my opinion.
As far as writing, it wasn't as descriptive as I would have wanted. Like another reviewer said the sex scenes could have been written out. It would definitely be a better read with descriptive steamy sexy scenes.
Now on to the sequel...
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bloodwraith is very a very good and well written story but so far there are no sex scenes. This is frustrating to me as a reader because the entire story is about sexual relationships. I feel like I am missing out. Love scenes are important for showing the nature of the relationship between the characters. Is this like a censored version of the story or do you intend to insert the love scenes later? I think that with love scenes added this story would be absolutely delicious and erotic.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 14. Kei's unrelenting harassment of Aidan is hilarious. Nikki keeps going back and forth between talking about Skye and approaching Aidan. Doesn't he realize that he is hurting Aidan? When the story started, it seemed as if Jett was going to be Aidan's love interest but now I wonder if Aidan's feeling for Nikki have changed at all. His head is filled with his memories of Nikki. I will keep reading to see how it turns out.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading Bloodwraith. So far this story is so sweet and sad at the same time. I understand Aidan's feelings of loving love and being afraid to try again. I just finished chapter 4 so I am guessing that he was in love with Nikki but was rejected in favor of Skye. It is sad because Aidan is seriourly in need of some love. I hope he can get Jett to give him a chance. I will have to keep reading to find out.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is really good!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hurry and update...I want to know what will happen to Jet and Aidan at his hometown.
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I´m sad that you ended this story, but I´ll wait for sequel patiently. *hug*
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Chaz is like magnet for troubles
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I´m happy that you wrote new chapter.
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...“I didn't break the skin so quit bitching. Just get into your favorite position.”......that was great XD
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you for new chapter
Chaz is so cute
Chaz is so cute