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haha yes! I totally saw the engagement ring coming! great job has :) More! :)

Quick update. let's keep them coming. poor Dayne--is he not having the worst week ever. how are things going to resolve themselves. now that dayne has realized that he is still in love with fate...where does that leave things with jaiden and eyvah? how are the brothers going to get back to that place that made them so great together? things for dayne have changed, but jaiden still betrayed him.

WOAH what a chapter... this is getting goooddddd.... need to see more of jaiden/evyah/dayne/fate in the next chappie please
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN

omg i just love this story!!! plsplspls update ssoon i can't stand the way theyre treating jaiden god thye make him out ot be so selfish he really isn't!! dayne a jackass if he doesnt love eyvah then why int he blue hell are u trying to be such a victime?!

What a great way to propose. :) I love the new storyline going with Dayne/Fate not to mention the drama with Jaiden/Eyvah. Please update soon.

I can't describe how bad I feel this moment. I not only dislike but hate, loath, scorn, abhor, detest and feel disdain for Eyvah!!! She sounded like she didn't have any remorse having an illicit affair with Jaiden. If she loved Jaiden why couldn't she have ended her relations with Dayne before she hopped into another. She has no morals two-timing Dayne, and worst still, coming between two brothers. And Jaiden is being stupid. What's with him! Leaving a perfectly loving family for that slut!!! Anyway, I hope Eyvah get's dumped by Jaiden in the end. I can't stomach what they are doing! Arrgh!!!

ooooo, you can't leave it like that!!!!! More soon please, Amazing!!!!!! I am sooo eager to know what will happen next!!!

everyone so quick to judge Eyvah. she can't help what she feels, i've been in a situation somewhat similar.
being with one guy but loving another and everyone thinking its the perfect relatiohship but slowly dying inside.
its really sad
its not the best thing in the world to do but i understand
love hurts people but when it feels right, what can you do but want to be with that other person
i don't think Eyvah is a bad person or jaiden
they are jus 2 people who want to be with each other even though huge obstacles
great chapter
can't wait for more

You know what? I think Dayne must have been screwing around with HIS ex-girlfriend and you know that he never really had gotten over Fate. Maybe he is with Eyvah to see, if he can get over Fate which he couldn't and same goes with Eyvah...which she fell in love with Dayne's brother. But, I will say this...Eyvah should of called it off but I think it would be a even bigger mess if Dayne knew why she broke up with him. People do stupid things when it comes to love and plus, you can't force yourself the love a person that you don't have connections with. Maybe Eyvah thought that she had some connections with Dayne, but realized in her that she doesn't.

On second thought, why she didn't tell Dayne from the beginning that 'I like you, but I only see each other as friends'. Now, that would really save her little bootie.

But, amazing chapter!! Update soon!!

OMG OMG OMG
That chapter was AMAZING and so SAD … cant wait to see what happens next
Please update SOON!!!