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OMG WTF!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously I am going to have a freakin stroke....what are you doing here first Isabelle almost died and lost her memory no you kill off Jordan please tell me its some freakin joke they are playing on her or something cause if you killed Jordan I will jump off a bridge omg omg omg you are killing me here really killing me!!! LOL update SOON!!!

4 words for you...you better be lying!!!! you can't just kill jordan off...i won't allow it. give me a dream sequence. give me a faked death to show her what it's like. but don't kill him. there's still too much unresolved with this family.

Ok this story is just becoming way to much. There is to much action going on. It is way to disappointing if he is dead and if he is a live there is way to many false ending I guess you would say.

NOOOOOOOOOO!!! A good response!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! jordan can't be dead, bring him back, it's bad enough that isabelle lost her memory but to kill of jorden would be beyond cruel.plz say ur kidding their love can't just be dead not possible they love each other to much. plz plz plz bring him back

Yes You should hide...I have just been able to read all the updates...How could you do this to Isabelle and Jordan again. Screw with the children all you want...but leave Isabelle and Jordan alone. They should be enjoying the love they have for each other not constantly being pulled from back and forth. You let Is lose her memory and you killed Jordan. I think it's time to stop reading this story. They were the reason I kept reading, knowing what they went through to get where they are now the last story and how they took that experience and raised their children made this story great. I know this is your story and you can do with it what you will...but sometimes you have to leave the main characters alone and bring out the others to keep a story alive. You were on the right track with the Jaiden/Eyvah/Dayne/Fate story. You didn't have to do anything to Jordan and Isabelle. Hell, you could have had Leila/Marc and Melis get in a bad accident leaving Leila in a coma and that would have been more dramatic. But to mess with your core charaters and ruin an already brilliant story...that is just wrong. I don't know if I can follow this story anymore...I'll just have to see what you do next...maybe...I don't know. I'm disappointed.

Damn right you should hide. Lucky for you, I don't believe it though.

Please please please don't kill her off!!!
It was 2 sad when she nearly died the last time!!!
Great story tho!! :-)

OMG!!!!! I hate it when you leave the story like that! I'll have ants in my pants waiting for you to update!
You can't leave them warring like that. Can you? And poor Isabelle? ARGH!
Update soon please!!!!

All I can say is WOW