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for Some Kind Of Wonderful

by Merrisa69

schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait to see what she's going to do. By the way he really needs to grow a backbone.
person savannah123
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'a so loving this story, especially chapter 3. I have never laughed so hard when Isabelle and Jordon wer both scared of the mouse, I had tears rolling down my face. Keep up the good work.
person Keri
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know it's taken me some time to review but I've been moving and graduating so count this as a review for the end of My Best Friend's Brother asa well as this story. I thouyght the way you ended the first one was perfect, it really showcased the kind of relationship Jordan and Isabelle have. Secondly, I think this sequel is a wonderful addition to their story and I definitely put my vote in for moving this story up to rated M. You have the beginings of a great plot with Dayne and Eyhva and the other children have great potential. I really can't wait to read more and see how they develop. You're off to a great start and the only thing I suggest is letting the readers know what happened to Josh and Kelly I always thought there was more to their story as well. Update soon.
person Keri
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS GUY!! He's such a great character and I love that he's Dru's son. He is so companionable with Leila and they really do make a great pair. THe mouse gig was great too and it will definitely be interesting to see how all this plays out. Please updatre soon, you have me hooked as always.
person A fan
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, can't wait for more...YAY!
person DB1
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@3. lol awesome chapter. update soon

*DB*
person kimmie
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wahhhh KISS KISS KISS!!!!!!!! Chase sounds so hotttt and i think that him and leila need to hook up!!!
person me
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that chapter was soo good :) yay :D

lol...i honestly love this!!!

Keep it up ;) u rock :D
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! that was truly evil just so you know.
person Kay
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I vote Yay!! I love it, update again really soon! :D