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for Some Kind Of Wonderful

by Merrisa69

person savannah123
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You had me crying again, that was great with the laxative, and I'm thinking that Evyah likes Jadien and Chase and Lelia are so cute together.
Keep up the good work.
person Kay
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Can't wait for another update!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved that chapter !!!! .. please update soon- i wana know what goes on @ da camping trip =)
jaiden and dayna also crack me up they are very funny =)=)
PLEASEEEEEEE UPDATE SOOOOONNNNNN
LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOO MUCH
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was hard to read this chapter. I was laughing so hard I was crying. You are right though Chace is alot like Jordan. I wanna know what is going on between the brothers and the new girl. Great chapter like always.
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! That was fun and as usual females won! Poor jordan though i felt bad about that. :P Update soon!!
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the bday card that was some funny shit. I love this story by the way if I haven't told you that a million times already. I hope you update soon and I mean soon. Good luck with it... we all love you!
person chez
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great to see another story up and running! just wondering whether or not you will be finsihing any of your other stories
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First it takes a big man to admite when he is wrong. Second I would have been less forgiving. Third why in the world is he still with Nichole? Fourth I cant wait to see the pranks. :)
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update soon
person Keri
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this camping trip certainly has possibilities. I can't wait to see how everything plays out for the various couples. Update soon!