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wow so we spend 23 chapters on Chase and Leila's relationship to have to completely killed... just great. and im sorry that this might come off as harsh, because in all honesty i really do enjoy ur writing, but it just sucks to see the story u spent hours reading spiral out in a totally different direction than u thought. and seriously shes pregnant... ok u did that in my best friends boyfriend! i feel like u continuously over work the plot and stretch it and make it quite unbelieveable, for example that she would have even started to date the guy that kidnapped her! i think this story had amazing potential but u constantly just make it all too complcated, taking the story in too many different directions at once. I am not even going to continue with this stroy because it is now, in my opinion, totally unrealistic and a huge let down. No one is with who they should be with and its turned into a totally different story. Im sure this review will have absolutly no impact on you because at this point you have gone so far in the story its not as if chase can magically be her guy again. Just letting you know im a very disappointed reader, and in spite of that fact, u do in fact have some talent and creativity.

That was a very heartbreaking chapter I'm pretty sad that they didn't keep the baby though.. noble.. and depthens Fate's character but I'm not sure if it was the 'right' decision. I guess we'll have to see.
Haha I can totally see another sequel coming out after this SKOW with Chris when hes 18 decides to come to America and becomes the new hotty in highschool or something :P
Haha that'd be so creepy though because then Jordan would be.. what? 60? LMAO. You can't convey Jordan still being a hotty when hes all old and wrinkly and in diapers :P

Keep it coming babe.
-Ashley.

PS: I think you might need me as a beta again (or any other source you find, of course ), I found alot of typos in the last couple of chapters.

thats a little weird, just giving up their baby? i mean yes it was quite selfless but i do not think practicle in the real world

I just read what Anon said and I hope that he/she comment doesn't take a toll on you because one author had bad when people told her that her stories are sucky and sent her terrible emails telling her that she should stop writing and I am telling you because you are my second favorite author on this site and I am telling you that you are doing a great job and your stories are very realisic and people go through these things everyday and now. Keep doing what you're doing and you said that it might end. =( I am so sad, I love reading this...bye bye cruel world.

OMG that was totally unexpected.. but i undastand y she did it.. altho if i was in dat position i dnt fink i
wld have the strength 2 wlk away...please can we see jaiden/evyah drama in the next chapter
and please update soon

.-. That last chapter...D: I'm sorry Has but I think you broke my heart .-. why would you DO that .-. <3 Pleaseeeee dont killl me with evyah >.<;;;

Wow. I was wondering where you would take this story next, but I didn't think it would be to London!
I hope they do get the baby back and all live happily ever after, but if they do live happily ever after that would be the end of the story and I, for one, don't want it to end.
Please update soon!

Oh my god I just spent the last 3 days reading up until this point! I was just as obsessed with the first one when it first came out D: Please update asap! I love your writing (btw I HATE Evyah >.< Kill her or something pl0x)

you do not understand how happy i get when i see that you have updatedd!!!!!!!!
This chapter was good, but i hope you wrap the baby fiasco up in the next chapter and
get started on the jaiden and evyah drama...i hope she is bieng true to him???????
PLEASEEE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON

AH! WHAT?! What's going on with Chase and Violet?!