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for Some Kind Of Wonderful

by Merrisa69

person DB1
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@25 OMG awesome chapter update soon

*DB*
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that just broke my heart. I love this story, I swear I do, but I honestly dont know if I can read this with a marc/leila pairing. I feel like crying 4 chase
person Jessie
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really thought Chase would end up with Leila. You should write an alternate ending haha they so belong together. Update soon
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cannot believe shes with marc.NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! i agree maybe you should do another ending where she ends with chase. im truly disappointed although you are a terrific writer
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Chase thats not fair, give him another chance!!
person living my life
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm fully in agreement with the chase lovers out there. its so hard to let go of chase because you wrote such a good buildup for him and then just shoved marc in. but you are a great writer so maybe i'll keep reading.
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand why she's not with Chase, they were absolutely meant to be. It really is hard to keep reading on and I'm sorry for that as I loved this story. Leila is so going to regret this.
person vhsster
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!! I can't wait for the next update!!! You're awesome!!!
Thank you!!!
person rosanne
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the kitchen scene!!!! poor marc, he should have waited until leila said anything.... i just love marc
person me
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you just ruined leila for me. if she could fall in love with marc in two weeks, then she was never in love with chase. she has become an annoying little twit. she's in love with the idea of being in love like her parents, but she doesn't know what love is. She just enjoys being loved. she's a spoiled brat if she can drop the love of her life because he didn't come running for her when she wanted him to. jordan used kat to try and move on. it wasn't real. leila was using marc for the same reason. once she realized that he was in love with her, she saw something more. she loves being loved, but i haven't seen any signs that she's in love with anyone. chase came the closest, but again, if he could be dropped for a two week fling, it wasn't love.