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for Some Kind Of Wonderful

by Merrisa69

person joi
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for bringing back Eyvah and the boys. they've got great chemistry and sexual tension. i loved jaiden's momentary lapse and his understanding of how wrong it was. of course --that just made me love the moment more. i hope there are more sneaky times.

i also love the idea of violet and chase. they both have an understanding of best friend loyalty, so they probably won't get jealous of leila or marc. it could work out.
person DB1
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@28 great chapter i like the chase, violet pairing. update soon!!

*DB*
person Jieshika
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chase and Violet, definitely Yay! lol and its as great as ever ive never liked a story so much...

Cant wait for ur update

-Jess
person skye
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
satisfying end to a really good story. your stories make me happy! (: keep writing, good job.
person M'e
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished ch.27. Ha ha ha! Soooooo funny! Can't wait for your next update.
person Has Fan
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad chapter but I am confused. No man could be so stupid to ask an EX to help them plan his wifes bday party.
How come Jordan and Isabell sped so little time together. I figured he would do anything to spend time with her,
and I mean he is the boss? Also unless we had a big age jump how can he soon be retiring?
person DB1
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@27 yay things are all good between them. update soon

*DB*
person Isa383
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew!!! That was close...Thank You, Thank You, Thank you....Never Again should you mess with Isabelle and Jordan...I know it is your story, but their strong bond and the intense love they have for each other is what inspires their children to have great relationships. I look forward to having love like that, because it does exsist. GREAT JOB!!!!! *kisses your feet and sings your praises*. So now that you have Is and Jordan squared away and Leila and Marc...You have to do something for Dayne and Jaiden...Can't wait for your next update.
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was crying with laughter… that chapter was GREAT.
You are the BEST
Please update SOON !!!!!!!!!
person sanne
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm so sorry for isabelle... birthdays are special for me...
i'm so glad that jordan is not screwing that girl!
but hey i want more update of mark and leila!!! i just love reading about them