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OMG I keep crying. It was soooo sad I really liked how she changed her mind once she realised just how much Chris and the adoptive mother had bonded. I am so not liking Jaidens wife Eyvah, shes being a total bitch with her always wanting attention. I mean come on Jaiden betrays his brothers trust and then being finally forgiven he goes to support his brother and shes bitchy cause he goes to England.Geez. She sounded really sweet in the begining but then she had to sleep with the brother didnt she. ARGH She doesnt desirve to be apart of the Callaway family. Each person has proved their love and is described through their actions and looks, whereas Eyvah shes almost as bad as Kat. I really wish she would have a turn around in personality for Jaidens sake if anything. Maybe there could be a after prenup thing?

oh my gosh i love you this rocks (:

Hi all,

Gosh, I haven't been on this site for a while. I know most of you are all wondering whats been going. I posted a message up on my profile which i assume most of you haven't seen. I will not be updating S.K.O.W, you can check back on my profile as for reasons why.

This story and Best friend's brother now known as Seduction will be avalible for purchase as books sometime in Jan. for those of you who have read BFB, i recommend you read the new and re-written version. Also Hatred will be out soon also.

You can find out more info about the launch of my books by going to www.cacoethespublishing.net you can find me under Shayla Hart. Thanks!

Hey.
Just wanted to ask if I could be on your mailing list?

LOVE this story!
SO much drama.
And so...erotica?
LOL.
Update! I wanna see what Eyvah really is like!
Cheers.

will you ever update this story? i'd really love to read how it ends

its been agesss where are u please come back and update
by the way are you going to continue writing other stories on here?
please say YES :)

Great story so far. Please finish it. By the way, what happened to all the chapters in your other stories?

Hey, I love this story is there going to be more anytime soon, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!

HAS (Author)

Hi all, thank you for the reviews.

I am writing this as a response to Anon's comment.

I am sorry the story has not been going as you expected. The thing is, that I believe a good story is one with twists and ones that keep you guessing. Why read a story when you already know who its going to end?

You said my story line is unrealistic? Well everyone has thier opinions i suppose. As far Marc, Leila and Chase. Well, I've explained my reasoning for that coupling. The reason Leila chose to be with Marc was because she saw the good in him. Yes he kidnapped her but only because he was manipulated by his evil father who lied to him for many many years. If you've read BFB then you know what i mean. Marc proved himself more than once that he wasnt the guy they thought he was.

How could you hate a guy that took a bullet to save your life, regardless of the fact that he kidnapped her, he never harmed her and made sure she was safe at all times. Chase and Leila I think are better off as friends, i love them as bf's they just click.

Anyway, I will continue to write and i will finish this story. If you continue to read then great if not then I'm sorry but i sincerely do hope you will.

Thanks to dove also. encouraging words are always nice, so i thank you so much for that.

Has x x x

this story is awesome!! i have just read both of them in a day and a half!! i loved them both and cant wait for the next update!! your story was so good it even made me cry!! keep writting cause it great!!