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for Elevator Act

by MarinLiliz

schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice job. Interesting how the Elevator can be exotic at times. That's why I always make sure some hot stud is in the Elevador with me. You never know! ~_^ (Oh! and a suggestion, there are some sentances that say 'knew' when they should be saying 'know', just thought I should mention that to you) But other then that, it was wonderful!

~*Kill_me_Kiss_me*~
person Saminada
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! O____o
What are the chances of that ever happening to me?!?? u_u
It would of been funny if the elevator would've opened before that guy had the time to finish his blow job!
Muahahahahahaha!!!! lol

haha...I really like this story!! And uh...I wonder if they'll meat again? I hope so! O_O
Anyways, I can't wait for more! Update soon! plz!!

person Aleks
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
will there be more???? I hope so!