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for Seduction

by NekoSlave

person Iyasu
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like it a lot.
person luvhp
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOh, what a nice friend to do that for her.
Well done. *squirms in seat*
person scymnus
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Seduction" was erotic and enjoyable. My favorite detail was about their saliva. That was lovely. Unfortunately, this fic felt a bit rushed to me. I would have liked a better picture of your characters' appearances for example.

Overall, I'm intrigued, and hope to see more from you.
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was short and sweet, and very much enjoyable.

Keep up the good work.
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it ^_^