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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I heart this story.
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story. I like it, it's interesting. Quite gloomy world you created there. The end of chapter 5 was brutal, but it was well written. I hope to read more soon. I want to know more about what'll happen with Rafael.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I was waiting for this update! D: Oh man, poor Styx. ;A; I hope he finds something good out of this or..something. :( T_T
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll be checking back for more.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... Intriguing--first word that entered my mind. He he. ^_^ I seldom take my time to type a review for stories I read. But considering I'm doing one now means that I really like your story. Your writing style's good. I'm looking forward to the next chappies to come. :)
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Always read the fine print. Anyway, I love it so far--the suspense, I can't wait!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I defiantly get the feeling that this was a very very bad idea for Styx. D: Very intriguing!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that guy sounds a lot like the devil. Signing his contract in blood, and having their souls. Hmm, I'm interested to know what all the races are in this world!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've only read a little bit of what you've put up-- most of the first chapter-- but I already like it a lot. It is SO refreshing to find decent writing on this website. So often people have interesting ideas but crap for writing skills. I'm one of the few, it seems, that likes some grammar and talent to go with her smut. ^^
Anyway, good job so far. Not sure if it's done as it is, but I'll find out. Thanks for posting and when I'm not about to pass out I'll write a more detailed review.
Anyway, good job so far. Not sure if it's done as it is, but I'll find out. Thanks for posting and when I'm not about to pass out I'll write a more detailed review.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great start i hope u write more