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for The Murky Windows of Perception

by madlodger

schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Your humor reminds me of my vast span of British relatives.

KD
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are welcome *hugs back*
I wrote it after being inspired by one of the posts from the Forum. This piece was written in about 10 min and containes 502 words.

This is my first one-shot and a first First Person's POV story. It seems to work for Perception.

It needs to be betaed, of course, as I am pretty crappy about grammar etc.
Any takers for Betaing? Live a message on this board with your spaceship's coordinates :)
person teeta
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^____^

I was so totally surprised by this piece that at the beginning I didn't know what to think of it, I mean, the person being in this steel room with only one murky window ... Life, really. I liked the idea of God sending chain letter emails and the Devil who actually tries to help the person wo lives in this room. A great piece of writing, making me actually think.

Thanks for it! *hugs*