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The first part was heartbreaking - I really like it. If that was the 'memory' - and that is what it seems to me - than please, please, please continue. I'm curious about the mysterious counterpart of the protagonist.


Sending Pocket Coffee against low blood preassure ... or is that considered chocolate ... maybe espresso instead? Whatsoever, more please!

This is an important news update.

Yura was in a terrible car accident and didn´t make it. She has gone away from this earth and joined the endless fans of yaoi up in the sky.

Please inform as many people who are her loyal fans of this tragic news.

-Damp

We will miss you Yura...

Hi, FallenGoddessOfBattle,
Interesting start. I figure that there is something creepy in that cave. No wonder it is guarded. Whatever that kid is trying to run away from is in there. You set mood for a story pretty good. Pretty good so far. My usual complaint is that we don't have descriptions on main characters. It's hard to visualize them. The rest of it is pretty good and this fic deserves to be continued :)

I read it because you classified it as slash. But I'm totally lost and have no idea what you're writing about.

And, at this point, I really don't care. Might read another chapter - if you write one - but if nothing is clarified, that would be it.