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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I didn't get to read much of it, but it looks really good. It's just that the spacing is frankly, horrible. It makes it rather difficult to tell who's saying what. You may want to insert spacing between your dialogue and narrative paragraphs.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fuckin awesome... This story completely sucked me in, you did a great job keep writing; there must be more.