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Ok, the killer is a real psycho, but I guess we've already knew that. I'm just saying it because he's freaking me out...
Grey is so sweet and kind... *swoons like a little girl*

And it gets more intersting... :)
I like the way you describe Naomi's emotions. She is in a terrible situation, but thank God she has Grey to her side. It would also be interesting to see how Grey will react once he finds out that the killer knows about him as well...
I guess Naomi and Grey will both be some kind of runaways, as the title says... :)
I also like the fact that your story is very well written concerning the grammar and the spelling. English is not my native language to be able to judge correctly, but it certainly is nice when a story has a clear and decent format. Extra kudos for that!

Very, very interesting... I will definitely be keeping an eye on this story.

interesting start so far. :)