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July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When is it going to continue. Please do not tell me and other readers that you are not going to finish it. Twelve chapters and no closure. That is for the birds.
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was really good so far at what I read. I really hope it gets more chapters! It's amazing!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! :)
Very nice update! So, detective Winslow might have something to do with Randy's insiders... and Randy, OMG!! What a psycho!!!
You did a very good job writing about Grey's and Naomi's POVs about each other and their relationship and their future... Grey is so sweet, bless him!
Very nice update! So, detective Winslow might have something to do with Randy's insiders... and Randy, OMG!! What a psycho!!!
You did a very good job writing about Grey's and Naomi's POVs about each other and their relationship and their future... Grey is so sweet, bless him!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that someone determined to help them is on their side now... God knows how much they need his help (has the police got anything to do with Randy?... like someone inside the police helping him or something?).
I like seeing Grey being so warm and protective of Naomi and the baby! I'm a sucker for romance! I wonder, what happened to the bad guys?
I like seeing Grey being so warm and protective of Naomi and the baby! I'm a sucker for romance! I wonder, what happened to the bad guys?
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice.. i demand more :)
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had real high hopes for this story because it sounded interesting and I love these kinds of things. But please, who knocks out the guy that is trying to kill a pregnant lady, not to mentioned has succeeded in killing several people already, and then just walks away? No one is that stupid! It's common sense that if you have the bad guy, even when he's down and out, you still have to make sure he doesn't come to and escape. That whole seen ruined the story for me, I'm sorry. But no one is that dumb.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet kiss! That was such a nice picture you described for us... I'll say it again, Grey is dreamy and Naomi is sweeter than honey... I would like to see what Randy's next move will be...
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! It's SO goddamned CUTE! I read it all in an hour and it's made my day. But, about Randy's boss....is it Naomi's Ex? Heh....
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing Chapters 8 & 9...
Hmm...Randy has some help on the inside, huh? I wonder...
Good to know, however, that the parents are sensible and honorable people. They look out for their kid, and even agree to a true artist's needs. *chuckles*
There's something to be said about great romance writing. I should note that your bit of writing at the end of Chapter Nine was as electric as the emotions between your leads. Excellent flow and emotion.
Keep up the great work!
Hmm...Randy has some help on the inside, huh? I wonder...
Good to know, however, that the parents are sensible and honorable people. They look out for their kid, and even agree to a true artist's needs. *chuckles*
There's something to be said about great romance writing. I should note that your bit of writing at the end of Chapter Nine was as electric as the emotions between your leads. Excellent flow and emotion.
Keep up the great work!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww... they are so sweet together, really. Naomi was so attentive and Gray didn't want to appear weak and ill. :)
Thank God his parents didn't buy Randy's lie. I was so surprised to see that he was working for someone... so, he isn't just a psycho murdering people randomly. He has others telling him what to do... do they have any connection to the police? This is getting seriously interesting. :)
Thank God his parents didn't buy Randy's lie. I was so surprised to see that he was working for someone... so, he isn't just a psycho murdering people randomly. He has others telling him what to do... do they have any connection to the police? This is getting seriously interesting. :)