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for Red Yellow Green

by Avocet

schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!1 I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!! I seriously hope you consider writing a story about how they met and stuff because this story as only whetted my appetite!!!!!!!!! I am addicted!!!!!!!!!! Please write another!!!!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plez continue is sweet story
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god you made me cry, not many people can make my cry and that was so sweet. aaaawwwwwwwww. i don't really hav any ideas about what to use next. the only thing that comes to mind for me is those swing kind of thing where you get strapped to the ceiling by like ropes and cuffs and rings bolted in to the ceiling. you know have rebel strapped in and have king swinging with his dick at just the right hight that it enters him when he swings back and hitts his sweet spot every time. that would be hot as fuck and of corse you'd add in your own stuff to make it your own. but any way great chap hope to see more.
person Kikuko
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*swoons* this one is good. keep it going! lol i have it bookmarked!
person gina
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, you wrote the rifle story. i read it when it came out and that one has stuck with me for a while. i'm enjoying your current story very much, from the dialogue to the kink to everything in between. you're a wonderful writer!
person Eumelia
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEY! This is damn good stuff!

Wish I knew the people who wrote it, they're damn brilliant.

How about you use-- [-grabbed by some men in black and escorted back to her cell to continue writing the story.-]

Foo.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this shit is so hot i swear to god. give me more i want more.