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person Chrysler
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was even better than the first—this one, I would really LOVE to see a plot go with this one more than anything. Amazing how you can fit so much in one chapter and leave us wanting MORE Than just sex. But the brothers were a trip—especially Michael, just jumping in the bath like it was nothing….it would be kinda hard NOT to stare. The brothers do certainly have an interesting relationship going on….fuck, it sounds down right erotic! I would LOVE to read more on them except background noises and foreshadowing promises. *pout * I also feel really bad for Mikeru—doesn’t sound like his life started out so hot. Poor thing passed out. It's hilarious that they both planned this seducing Mikeru thing, and he doesn't even know. Wish I could read on and see what more would happen AFTER Mikeru woke up, is it more than sex or do they have feeling for him as well?--Sammael definetly showed a soft side for a second. But ah well. I just KNOW the next ficlet will be amazing, probably allow me to forget all about this one.

I love your style, so dynamic and raw. I'm happy to see you update quickly as well. Thanks for the quick read.
person Seb
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD
That was...
adorable?
person V
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not really a fan of the first story, but I did enjoy Bath Time Fun! Cute characters...well except for the drugs and the cutting. That's way to dangerous!
person ariesgirl
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved both of the chapters! are you planning on continueing any of them? as much as hot random smut is, i love plot. im really looking forward to more. really really hot ^^
person Layla
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These stories (so far) are so amazing. I can't wait to see what you'll throw out next. Hopefully...it will be soon. Keep up the excellent work!
person shadow
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue chapter 2's story i'de like to see the end of that
person Seb
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! The second was was even better! I loved it! I can't wait to read more!
person Cami
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... Damn, that was nice. Shockingly rough and explicit~ I don't think the scientists are the only ones who are perverts. Please, continue!