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person Seb
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D:
Chapter six had me going "D:"
That is so sad! :{
person BennyPeace
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is really something, I think you can do a lot with this story. Actually, I really really want you to do something with this story. Pleaseee elaborate on it!
person Avery
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting stories. I would say keep the Senna/Yui ones going. I'm wondering what their world is like and what they were manufactured for/what they are. You kept us guessing.
person shadow
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6 was so sad :(


but i love all your chapters so far :) they rock!!!
person Holly
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just thought i'd let you know that I really enjoy these. Unlike a lot of other one shots, you really set up a nice story. I don't know how you do it in such a short story, but it's wonderful. ^^; Keep it up!
person Bastian
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job. I really like this pairing and wouldn't mind reading more of it, if your gonna write more. Which I think you should. Cuz its good! :D
person Angela
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ Mikeru is soooo cute and i so vote for the seperate piece for them if you're willing to try it
person ariesgirl
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww they re all so cute together
i d really like it if you d write more
update soon please
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the second one
it would be kewl for you to continue that one
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like the characters in the second story! They're intriguing, and really cute in their own ways. I'm suprised as to how much personality you could fit into each of them without much background info.

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Actually, both of the stories' characters were hot. I want more of both! xD -reachy-