rate_review Reviews

Wow! This is excellent! I love the beginning! Aideen is such a great strong character, and what a ambition “to be rich enough to own a harem of beautiful men!” I think I will go along with that.

I love how you introduce Mr. Drake as being followed by his “minions” instead of just calling them flunkies. Does this mean Mr. Drake is a devil? He sure sounds like one handsome devil. And you have done such a great job of introducing your characters and the whole scene is just bristling with sexual tension. Great Job!

Anyway, excellent beginning! I am so excited about reading chapter 1.

Chapter 1

All righty then, I think that was pretty gutsy of Aideen to walk away like that during their meeting, especially when she wanted the contract so badly. She’s certainly can play the game can’t she. I like that. I think it’s cool as well that Drake noticed her lascivious footwear.

So now everybody is going out for a night on the town, and it sounds like Aideen is all dressed up and looking hot. I like Amber and Sterling, they sound like a lot of fun. Now Drake has walked in. This is going to be good!

Oh cool, a rendezvous by the bathroom! “I assure you, the pleasure is all yours.” Oh my, that was a bit rude of Aideen wasn’t it? Isn’t that a little imprudent of her to do that, considering he just brought her a huge contract? But then he responds by backing her into the wall and kissing her -- how sexy!!! I love it!

Anyway I can’t wait until the next chapter!! I just love your story!!

that was AWSOME!!!!! I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love these types of stories.

Hehehe. Much fun but I still think she should have bitten him. Probably would have turned him on. Fabulous as always, dear.

thats right i did! i stumbled over after reading that little note over in the TB section. hooray for co-owning harems of sexy anime men! works for me.

lol that guy is such an ass!! sure makes the story fun to read. continue on! ^_^

Whoo! Lol, that ending was fantastic! I could really feel the sexual tension! The scene just outside the bathroom was well written. Is it wrong that I kind of love Alasdair for being such a dominant male?? I hope not, lol. I can't wait to see how things progress between these two! Sooo...update soon!!!!!! Lol.

Squee! I love her already. Where's the next chapter?

ooooo this sounds really good, please continue.

"All right, I take it back: I don’t hate men. As long as they’re gorgeous, silent, and willing to submit to my genius" hahaha loved that line! that and the one about being rich enough to own a harem of men...definitely nice idea in my book. we should so be rich enough for that.

the dude sounds hot. i'm not a fan of really short hair on guys, i love the long hair (shoulder length qualifies lol).

Ahh!! Great story so far! Update soon, I can't way to see how these two will interact with each other. I also love how he notices her shoes. It's a small detail but it can make such a difference...lol, at least that's how I personally justify my passion for buying tons of fantastic shoes.