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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter so soon! This is such a treat!!!
I have to say, this little power struggle between Aideen and Alasdair is just so much fun! So now she’s dressing for revenge. I love it. Now all she needs is a leather outfit and a whip. Lol
Damn, I want a pair of shoes like that! I love all this preoccupation with her sultry shoes. And I love all the talk and innuendo as well. You really have a gift for suggestive dialog. They’re getting me excited and all they are doing is talking! Wow!
Alasdair just goes for what he wants doesn’t he, grabbing her by the door away again. He doesn’t even ask for permission! Secretly Aideen must be very smitten or she wouldn’t have agreed to lunch or to dinner. lol
I must say I’m really looking forward to Friday. Your dialog alone is worth the price of a ticket! Excellent writing!!!
I have to say, this little power struggle between Aideen and Alasdair is just so much fun! So now she’s dressing for revenge. I love it. Now all she needs is a leather outfit and a whip. Lol
Damn, I want a pair of shoes like that! I love all this preoccupation with her sultry shoes. And I love all the talk and innuendo as well. You really have a gift for suggestive dialog. They’re getting me excited and all they are doing is talking! Wow!
Alasdair just goes for what he wants doesn’t he, grabbing her by the door away again. He doesn’t even ask for permission! Secretly Aideen must be very smitten or she wouldn’t have agreed to lunch or to dinner. lol
I must say I’m really looking forward to Friday. Your dialog alone is worth the price of a ticket! Excellent writing!!!
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"If you want to put notches in your belt with the daughters of the rich and famous, go right ahead, but I won’t feel sorry for you when you come up with some horrid STD." - CLASSIC!! loved that. i'm loving the personalities of these two as well as Sterling. excellent story so far. ^_^
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! i'm so happy i get an announcement for my comeback! YAY for slapping and humping hot fantasy men! That makes for a fun picture lol!
hahaha Sterling: "You know, girl stuff." that line cracks me up. that and "Frosty prosti" thats amusing. that man amuses me highly, he's like some kind of comedy relief or something to get Aideen into a better mood...or in this case at the end, really pissy lol. and Sterling trying on shoes...yea i might be able to see that lol.
damn smug bastard Alasdair leaving a message like that. i'd want to send a raging wolverine after him.
now Orlando Bloom doing that would be quite nice! ^_^
lol did we ever get to three? i was waiting for the news story of two crazed chicks robbing banks and raving about co-owning harems! lol
hahaha Sterling: "You know, girl stuff." that line cracks me up. that and "Frosty prosti" thats amusing. that man amuses me highly, he's like some kind of comedy relief or something to get Aideen into a better mood...or in this case at the end, really pissy lol. and Sterling trying on shoes...yea i might be able to see that lol.
damn smug bastard Alasdair leaving a message like that. i'd want to send a raging wolverine after him.
now Orlando Bloom doing that would be quite nice! ^_^
lol did we ever get to three? i was waiting for the news story of two crazed chicks robbing banks and raving about co-owning harems! lol
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I’m so happy you updated! I’ve been looking forward to this story for a long time!
I am so jealous. I want a shopping buddy just like Sterling, he’s absolutely perfect. I can’t go with my boyfriend because he hates shopping with a passion and I can’t go with my Mom because our tastes are nothing alike. I want Sterling. Lol
That is sad that Sterling broke her heart, at least they are still friends. He really is a good guy.
So Alasdair is calling her again. How fun! I can’t wait for you next chapter! :D
And yes I thought Basilisk was very good, but it’s very sad. :-(
I am so jealous. I want a shopping buddy just like Sterling, he’s absolutely perfect. I can’t go with my boyfriend because he hates shopping with a passion and I can’t go with my Mom because our tastes are nothing alike. I want Sterling. Lol
That is sad that Sterling broke her heart, at least they are still friends. He really is a good guy.
So Alasdair is calling her again. How fun! I can’t wait for you next chapter! :D
And yes I thought Basilisk was very good, but it’s very sad. :-(
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story!! awesome characters, the dialogue is fairly fantabulous. especially the Orlando line, i fell over laughing with that one. can't wait for the next update.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol i would so want to beat the shit out of him and jump on him at the same time! what an ass! yet it makes for an amusing story ^_^ i bet she'll be fuming the next day.
onwards to co-owning harems! do-do-doooo!!! *sad attempt at trumpet sound* hmmm....*counts funds...anime sweatdrops* well i'll have to rob my bank! ^_^ lol
onwards to co-owning harems! do-do-doooo!!! *sad attempt at trumpet sound* hmmm....*counts funds...anime sweatdrops* well i'll have to rob my bank! ^_^ lol
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Miss Murder, I think you do such a wonderful job. I may have to go get “Trinity Blood” just so I can read more of your work. Of course to be honest, I was thinking of checking it out anyway. I love anime as well! Especially Iason Mink. I even wrote a story for him, but I’m afraid to post it. I think I would be attacked for writing het on what is considered to be Yaoi classic. I was wondering if you have you ever seen “Basilisk?”
But anyway, back to your wonderful story. I had to laugh at the card Alasdair sent Aideen. “So are you through with little boys? He certainly has a high opinion of himself doesn’t he? And here is Aideen throwing his flowers right in the trash, along with his card. hehe
That’s sweet that Sterling wants to keep an eye on Aideen. Nothing like having someone watch your back for you. He’s a good friend.
Alasdair sure isn’t above using manipulation to get his way, threatening to pick up the proposals up personally. hehe I thought it was amusing she wore the same shoes again to their “date.”
I must say you certainly made that kiss hot! Wow!!! And I get the impression that Alasdair has just a wee bit of a sadistic streak in him, biting her like he did! And he calls her his pet. I’m sure Aideen loved that!
Well I absolutely love this story!! You are such a good writer! Keep up the great work and please update soon!
But anyway, back to your wonderful story. I had to laugh at the card Alasdair sent Aideen. “So are you through with little boys? He certainly has a high opinion of himself doesn’t he? And here is Aideen throwing his flowers right in the trash, along with his card. hehe
That’s sweet that Sterling wants to keep an eye on Aideen. Nothing like having someone watch your back for you. He’s a good friend.
Alasdair sure isn’t above using manipulation to get his way, threatening to pick up the proposals up personally. hehe I thought it was amusing she wore the same shoes again to their “date.”
I must say you certainly made that kiss hot! Wow!!! And I get the impression that Alasdair has just a wee bit of a sadistic streak in him, biting her like he did! And he calls her his pet. I’m sure Aideen loved that!
Well I absolutely love this story!! You are such a good writer! Keep up the great work and please update soon!
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well....that was...wait-gimme a minute...*fans face*...that was...hot. Me likey alot so keep writing!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this!
what a cocky bastard Alastair is but damn if he isn't sexy too. (i love the name Alastair also!)
just because aideen has some class and is professional doesn't make her an ice queen! typical male :p
poor aideen...i wonder how long it will take her before she finally caves in. if i were her i'd teach mr. drake a lesson or two before i let him in my pants.
who knows he may have underestimated her.
i'm definitely enjoying this. both of your chapters are well written and i'm so glad you didn't just rush into the sex immediately.
eagerly waiting for the third chapter! i'm curious if she's going to blow him off or meet up with him.
keep uo the good work :)
what a cocky bastard Alastair is but damn if he isn't sexy too. (i love the name Alastair also!)
just because aideen has some class and is professional doesn't make her an ice queen! typical male :p
poor aideen...i wonder how long it will take her before she finally caves in. if i were her i'd teach mr. drake a lesson or two before i let him in my pants.
who knows he may have underestimated her.
i'm definitely enjoying this. both of your chapters are well written and i'm so glad you didn't just rush into the sex immediately.
eagerly waiting for the third chapter! i'm curious if she's going to blow him off or meet up with him.
keep uo the good work :)
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... He's very..... pushy, but hey it's still hot in a way. I like this chapter too and I hope you update again sometime soon. Good luck!