rate_review Reviews

I'd like to know where in holy hell the rest of this and you are.

this is such an amazing story and you're a wonderful writer. i have been waiting on pins and needles to see what will happen next. good luck in all you do.

I've really enjoyed reading this story so far. It IS nice to have some plot to go with the smutt, yet because of this, I'm DYING for them to finally have sex... (I'm such a perv) ;) I'm here rooting for both them, and YOU, so please update soon. ^^

Excellent work. Very well done. I completely concur about the fact there are too many BDSM stories out there that completely leave out the negotiations, which are an EXTREMELY important part of the whole thing. I'm very proud of you for sticking to your guns.

You have an amazing story here and you have a wonderful way with words. I find myself laughing along with the story at times and other times, turned on. You can almost picture these people as people you would meet on the streets or as your co-workers. Very very nice story and I can't wait to read more!

Another chapter! Yay! (and a good one too!)XD

Oh. My. GOODNESS! I have to say, this is promising to be some *hot* stuff! But I think you already know that, yes? ^_~ I'm always looking for good things in the Erotica section, so I'm really happy to have stumbled upon this gem. I've really enjoyed reading this story so far! I really like your characterization of Aideen; she's strong and independent, but vulnerable too. Definitely something I can relate to. ^ ^ And I think you've hit on every girl's fantasy with Alasdair. I'd go for that, let me tell you. XD You've got good pacing too(even if it's a tease sometimes)! I hope you update as soon as you can! I wanna know what's going to happen next between the happy couple, so I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ^o^v

my review didn't go through and I am too tired to write all the fluff so here are the main points:
You took too long and I have no idea what I asked you,
AWESOME and worth the wait,
I found 2 spelling/english errors.

Oh my gosh!!! I am so so glad I stumbled onto this story! I love it- can't wait for the next chapter.

Holy crap yay!! More stuff to read, and I finally got a chance to get around to it this weekend. Even though nothing really *happened* (lol) in this chapter, I still enjoyed it since I think it builds up to more stuff annnnd gives the story some more depth since it kind of works on their relationship...or...whatever is going on between them lol. It's like a taste of more good things to come!! Hooray!