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for Aggression

by AndAmpersand

person nepherti
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was... very erotic. :) Very vivid and like being able to sneak into someone's dream... hot and sweet. Well done!
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh isn't that the best time to pounce someone, when they're asleep and/or groggy? I liked it, the descriptions from the perspective of the guy was really nice and struck my fancy, more so than I would have thought. It was short and sweet, but it was really good, didn't need anymore than what you had. Awesome job!
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing to say the least. A wonderfully quick tryst in the night. I know this is said to much, but I do not read a lot male/male fiction. But I am glad I had read this. The sleepiness was actually quite funny, but at the same time added a true sense of realness to it. It would be a shame for you to never let these two have another night together, but that’s up to you. Congratulations on this great writing.
E.M.