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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Has possibilities.
Just please make at least one of your characters likeable. Cigarette-wanting man possibly get there - but he has a long row to hoe. Blondie - so far - seems more sympathetic.
Just please make at least one of your characters likeable. Cigarette-wanting man possibly get there - but he has a long row to hoe. Blondie - so far - seems more sympathetic.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im engaged i like the beggining i luv cheeky slightly crazy main characters who get in lots of trouble lol good start hope u do more.