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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Master Giovanni is my favorite character, even though he is cruel, he is so sexy. The way you describe him, makes me think he is a very sexy and appealing man. My second favorite is Snow Cabello. She sounds pretty, and I like she spunk.
Great Job, I look forward to more. I wonder if master Giovanni gets a hold of the detective, and breeds him with Snow.
Sasha
Great Job, I look forward to more. I wonder if master Giovanni gets a hold of the detective, and breeds him with Snow.
Sasha
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO that bastard. Making his own son basickly punish her for his wrong doing.
Keep the story going it is good, even though the first sex scene in it I don't like cause of what he is making his son do. Poor girl.
Keep the story going it is good, even though the first sex scene in it I don't like cause of what he is making his son do. Poor girl.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a twist with the new chapters.
As for James being forced to have sex with snow no let his bastard father change his mind.
As for James being forced to have sex with snow no let his bastard father change his mind.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I am glad you updated. Keep it up, I wonder if she gives in and starts being a good pony then the detective finds her, and they steal him too, to make the perfect babe.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, you are forming James into such an awesome character!! angsty boys are such a treat!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Very few Pony Girl stories on here and this one is a good one. Makes you wonder if he is going though all this expense for her whats his plan?
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, James is just...*squees*
and Giovanni's pretty much awesomely scary.
and Giovanni's pretty much awesomely scary.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's strange because I never thought I'd be interested in this kind of story. It seems so cruel, yet I find myself constantly wondering about the next chapter. And how James will play a role throughout the stroy. Update soon!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adored it, i've read quiet a few pony play stories. And this story deffinately holds promise. Update soon! I'll be lookin' for it!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.
I have only read one other pony play story that I like and I have to say this story is going to be tough competter.
I have only read one other pony play story that I like and I have to say this story is going to be tough competter.