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for Snow White Caballo

by dark1starr

schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapters absolutely great.

I am glad your showing that pony play isn't all stealing girls and guys, forcing them to be horses, modifying them, brain washing, selling babies as if they were animals.

Pony play can be a beautiful thing, as all things BDSM. Unfortuantly to many authors, and directors want to focus on the bad.

Kodos to you.
person Leentjef
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes time and rape seccion broke her
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this very very very good keep going and post
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He is hot! I have to say that I loved reading this chapter. I wonder in Giovanni gets a hold of him. That would make it quite intresting.

Sasha
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun. $10 says he likes the undercover a bit too much. haha. okay, favorite character would be James for me, cause i can't get enough of the tortured, heart-on-his-sleeve boys. plus, is it just me, or does he have a hidden fire?
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, and the twists keep coming! awesome work! can't wait for more
person Leentjef
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep going and post
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep going and post
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the last three chapters. they show the good/real side of pony play. even the 11th chapter with Giovanni treating her better and giving her treats. this is what pony play is. something that both people get pleasure from.

*hugs*
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty hot. I thought it akward, how the doctor had no problem defieling James, but it was a fantastic chapter. I can't wait for another update.
Keep up the great work.

Sasha