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Wow! This is really an exciting story! Great Job!! And here I just thought it would be just a simple pony play story. Of course you say you like plot, which to me, only makes the smut better.

You asked my favorite character. Why it’s Drake of course! He is the hero after all, at least I see him that way. And I like the relationship between him and Mistress Diana. I’m hoping that Drake can save White Caballo before it’s too late.

Master Giovanni is quite a fascinating villain. I’m still rather curious about what makes him tick. The story he told James about his mother was very revealing and at least showed why he had so much contempt for James. He thinks compassion is a weakness and he way too self-confidant, which is his major weakness making him underestimate everyone, including his own son. I think this will be his downfall. But anyway, great job at creating quite the ruthless bastard! I almost suspect James will enact his revenge on him in a very surprising way.

Anyway I’m hooked now! Excellent writing and keep up the great work. I wish only I could update as fast as you do. I’m envious. :D

i've followed this story with most interest and this last chapter made me want to punch that SOB Do I need to mention who? That in itself is a feat, you managed to get me totally engrossed, submerged with in the story.

And I adore Drake he seems such a kind hearted yet strong man and I hope all his hard work pays off.

I appologise for not reviewing sooner.
TBC x

WOW, things are really starting to come to head. I hope James get's his wish, he's a good boy and she's worth his care and love.

Great story, please keep writing

very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye

That took a twist I never expected.

*Jumps up from my seat for another standing ovation.* YES Giovanni got what he deserved. His ass kicked and his possessions taken. Now I fear where she is. I hope she is alright.

Supper glad that someone stood up to him , the rotten bastard.

Keep it up.

very very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Haha that was funny, chad. I wonder when silver mane is going to get to talk to snow cabello, and if he is going to be forced to breed with her.

Sasha

Two more great chapters in my favorite fiction. Its my first story to check for updates everyday. I love it. Can't wait till the next updates.

Till then *HUGS*

Intresting start to the show, I wonder when Giovanni is going to get a look at him.
You hold me in suspence, Great work keep it up.

Sasha