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But...what about her real father?? Shouldnt he know his daughter is finally safe?? :(
But overall great story!! It was very well written and interesting!
Wonderful job!!

Wow, a well done story on Ponyplay indeed! Bravo! Of course I have a deep love of this fetish as well, (Check out "A New Life" or "Darkfire") on my original stories.
The characters were well thought out and brought to life. I wish there would have been some more descriptions of the actual all-4's riding, but you did a fine job of bringing kink/plot and character together!
Hope you do another ponyplay story! There just isn't enough of us doing them on AFF.
Warmly,
Kanashii

The end! I’m kind of bummed now. I appreciate you finishing this though. I sure hope I can do the same and finish my story.

Little James sounds so cute. He was so brave and protective too, attacking Giovanni when he nabbed Seren. I just love dogs. I have a German Shepherd/Husky mix and a Golden Retriever Mix, and they’re my babies. They even have their own couch downstairs.

I’m relieved James didn’t kill Giovanni with a pitchfork, but I’m also relieved Giovanni is dead. They would have always been worried about him if he had gone to jail, or to the mental hospital. It is sad though, after all he was a victim too.

Yay! Happy ending! I like that. So James won Seren and Drake won Diana. Wonderful story Star! Keep up the great work!

*does happy dance* giovanni's dead giovanni's dead giovanni's dead giovanni's dead

OMG these three chapters just choked me up. Finally the bastard got what he had coming to him. And to boot the puppy horse helped kick his ass.

And seren's back to being seren at last. horray for her.

and that wedding. omg what can i say beautiful just beautiful. and raven treating a stallion like a human OMG what a twist.

but man what a ride this story was. i am sad to see it end. but i guess its time.

so here is one last standing ovation to you starfyre

aww this was sweet and an happy ending
god i am a little sad because i really loved this fic
i hope that you will continue to write so i can continue to read your great fics
keep going and post
bye bye

Yay! I’m so happy to see Seren getting better and that’s so great that Seren and James are getting married! I have a bad feeling though that Giovanni is going to show up and make things unpleasant. I suppose a lot can happen in three chapters.

Great Job as usual!!

I've been gone on a trip and have been so excited to read this now that I'm back.
And I am not dissapointed at all.
I Look forward to how you will finish the story.
I know that there is still so much you can cover.
What will happen to Giovanni?(sp?)
I am most curious about Seren's father. Will Drake report back to him? etc.
Thank you, thankyou, thank you, for being to quick to update!

Awww! heart racing and tear bringing! Its so sard that we come to an end. But it was Awesome!

Weldone and many kisses I look forward to reading your next piece.

TCB

Hi there Star,
This time I will try not to leave a review that is unfathomable, okay. lol

Wow! That’s quiet a twisted tale about Giovanni’s family. No wonder he was so cruel to James. You really do have a very creative imagination.

I am relieved to see that Seren is getting a little better. I think her and James would make a nice couple.

I take it that Giovanni is going to show up at the house. Will James end up killing him with a pitchfork I wonder? I take it that Giovanni is quite insane now.

Anyway, lovely chapters my dear. You really are a speedy writer. :D

Only 5 more NNNNOOOOOOOOO. Oh well guess I will need more Snow White Caballo patches.

On to my review.

Loved the chapters.

Chapter 23 actually made me feel sorry for Giovanni to have lived that way. I thought he treated James the way he did cause he thought of him as half an animal.

The rest omg she finally got clothes on. Even tried on Chads. Great news. Then the kiss OMG even after that fucking he forced on her. Wow.

Can't wait for the next update.