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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep it coming, keep it coming!
great setup, but we need some smut too!
please! please! please!
great setup, but we need some smut too!
please! please! please!
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=) Can't wait for the next update. Seems interesting so far =)
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to more. Keep it up, please!
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! keep goin, honey!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...so I'm intrigued. I'm not quite sure what's going on. But hopefully in the next chapter will get more details. I think your writing style is pretty good but perhaps there should be more details on how the characters are feeling...maybe its just me I don't know. But I'll definitely keep a look out for this fic.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was short and akward alone, not much to catch a readers attention. But it seems to have gained more of a plot now and I'd continue to read if you'd continue to write.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'll keep reading it, if you'll keep writing it!
will it help if I review it seven or eight times?
please!
will it help if I review it seven or eight times?
please!