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Aww...that was a sweet/awesome chapter. I'm starting to really love this story, can't wait for the next update!

i really like your story, please keep writing it

You've changed categories! I couldn't find this at first and was worried you'd taken it down.
Great chapter. It's sweet how Azel seems to care about her already even though he's trying not to. I like the way their personalities and relationship are developing. Please update soon.

Aww Azel cares about how she feels about him, how cute lol. Nice update, keep em' comin'.

I love it. I'm impressed on how you made Azel dominating in a way but not physically. It's such a cool way you made him perfect. I am so in love with him (so kill me, I love military guys!) I just can't wait to read more! Hurry! :-)

I bet Azel is a pussycat under all of those layers lol.

I like this story so much that I joined AFF just so I could leave a review so you keep writing! I love Cat and it's cool that she's sensible without being some annoying weepy girl but you can still tell she's scared and unsure. I'm not really sure what to make of Azel as he is so mysterious but that scene between them at the end of Chapter 5 was sweet. The sinew collar sounds so nasty!

I think you would have received more reviews if this was in the Romance category as it's pretty hard to find multi-chapter narrative-led work anywhere else in the Original section and the stories in the Romance category tend to get more views and reviews.

You've got a good stroy going. I have looked forward to every chapter. Thanks for keeping the length of the chapters in mind. Love the characters, you write then well. Look forward to the next chapter(s).

Awesome story so far, please continue.

OOOOOhhh and the plot thickens. =)