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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I haven't been reviewing this story very often. In fact I can only remember putting a review up once for sure. However, this has nothing to do with your story, I've always seem to have trouble logging in.
As for your story, I LOVE IT! Azel and Cat are so great I don't know where to begin. So is completely innocent and he is completely experienced. Oh, your smut chapter was good and I thought is was great for Cat's character. I mean she is unusally innocent and needs to get use to a man's body before any sex. So, first it was kissing and cuddling, then they seen each other naked and the HJ. I think this is a nice step ladder for her. She will be able to trust and enjoy him so much better.
Who I really feel bad for was her friend, are we going to know what happened to her later on?
Oh, I really hope the dog/wolf stays, I love animals. Besides he could be her protector when Azel is not around.
Well, still looking forward to your updates.
As for your story, I LOVE IT! Azel and Cat are so great I don't know where to begin. So is completely innocent and he is completely experienced. Oh, your smut chapter was good and I thought is was great for Cat's character. I mean she is unusally innocent and needs to get use to a man's body before any sex. So, first it was kissing and cuddling, then they seen each other naked and the HJ. I think this is a nice step ladder for her. She will be able to trust and enjoy him so much better.
Who I really feel bad for was her friend, are we going to know what happened to her later on?
Oh, I really hope the dog/wolf stays, I love animals. Besides he could be her protector when Azel is not around.
Well, still looking forward to your updates.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We haven't had an Azel POV for a couple of chapters so it was gnice to see how he is reacting to all the recent events and the way they are slowly getting used to each other phsically and emotionally. The scene at the end was so sweet. Hopefully Azel isn't going to get rid of Cat now that he's feeling all possessive of her. I like the bane hound but I wonder how he'll cope in an army camp when he's only just got used to Cat and Azel!
Please don't stop writing this: I love it, your reviewers and raters love it and a lot of people read but just don't review (I'm guilty of that!). Please don't be discouraged and I hope you update soon.
P.S. As much as I love this story the spelling and grammar errors can let the story down sometimes. Two spelling errors that really stuck out for me this chapter were the chapter title which should be "Repercussions" not "Reprocussions"; and when you said Azel's mood had turned "fowl" rather than "foul" unless he was feeling like a bird all of a sudden ;)
Please don't stop writing this: I love it, your reviewers and raters love it and a lot of people read but just don't review (I'm guilty of that!). Please don't be discouraged and I hope you update soon.
P.S. As much as I love this story the spelling and grammar errors can let the story down sometimes. Two spelling errors that really stuck out for me this chapter were the chapter title which should be "Repercussions" not "Reprocussions"; and when you said Azel's mood had turned "fowl" rather than "foul" unless he was feeling like a bird all of a sudden ;)
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more, more for the love of hyne more!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story.....i think your doing an awsome job with it
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I also think the bane hound is kinda cute =)
hope he's coming along for the trip...yay
hope he's coming along for the trip...yay
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....also kinda anxious to what you'll name him ^-^
I think chap eleven was really cute and i really like your style.
You develope azel and cat so well and she so cute =)
I think chap eleven was really cute and i really like your style.
You develope azel and cat so well and she so cute =)
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story don't stop
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love your story. The plots amazing and the romance WOW. Keep it up and I can't wait until the next chapter.
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I want more! Seriously. I am so in love with this story! I love Azel and I want you to write more now! (Now I know how it feels when I just stop writing!) Don't stop writing! I need to see this play out. It's such an amazing story! You dont even know how much I need to read more :-) Great smutty chapter! :-) I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written and I like how everything happened slowly but realistically like Cat not necessarily wanting to do it but feeling obligated to do it or at the end when she realises what this means to Azel. It must be so strange for her to see him lose control that way.
I think Azel apologised at the end because he feels guilty for taking advantage of Cat when he told himself he wouldn't and maybe he feels weak for exposing that side of himself to her. This is one of the reasons why I like this story so much; it wasn't just hot smut but actually gave us deeper insight into the characters and developed their relationship. I can't wait until the next chapter. Update soon please.
Also I'm dumb because it took me an age to figure out what H/J stood for. *blush*
I think Azel apologised at the end because he feels guilty for taking advantage of Cat when he told himself he wouldn't and maybe he feels weak for exposing that side of himself to her. This is one of the reasons why I like this story so much; it wasn't just hot smut but actually gave us deeper insight into the characters and developed their relationship. I can't wait until the next chapter. Update soon please.
Also I'm dumb because it took me an age to figure out what H/J stood for. *blush*