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whew, I'm glad to see updates no matter how short they may be. I'll take anything I can get. ^_^

Yay, I'm glad it's back! Thunderstorms... author's worst enemy. Keep writing, cliffhangers drive me nutty!

I'm so glad you're back. That's awful about your computer, I'm glad everything is OK now.

I've read the chapter over and I'm going to guess that the symbolism lies with Wulf. At first I thought he might symbolise Cat after she had the thought that they are both pets but after getting to the end I think he might symbolise Azel in some way with the way he protects Cat. I think Wulf must have gone back to the war horse if the blood on his muzzle at the end is any indication so I think that symbolises something but I'll admit I'm not quite sure what aside from that Azel will return to Cat. From what Azel said to Cat at least we know he won't die yet. I really wonder what his sins are? He seems like a fundamentally decent person. I love the how you add so many layers to this story.

Update soon please as you have seriously got me puzzling over what it symbolism in this cahpter; I bet my guess is completely wrong!

we didn't get an update on monday...
i'm crying in my pretzels here...
come on burn, please?!?!
i gotta know what happens next!.... is he gonna come back from battle
all man stinky and "hungry" ... is she going to be in danger while he's
gone? will the wolf rescue her from some badass soldier guy?
help me.....
must.. have.. more..

So which monday did you mean? ;) update soon.

Thanks for the new chapter. I'm glad we get to see Azel open up a bit...I wonder what he meant. I love Wulf already, he's so cute. I didn't really visualise just how HUGE Wulf until I looked at the pictures you posted so they were very helpful :) Stupid war for interfering in Cat and Azel's growing relationship although I guess that's inevitable considering the title of the story.

No problem about the mistakes. Didn't notice anything this time ;) I'd offer to beta but I'd be no use as my grammar is freaking atrocious. Looking forward to the next update!

It was nice seeing Azel open up to her about something he always tries to be cold all of the time.

I thought this chapter was well written especially the last section on the development of Azel and Cat. I think the balance between slave and master and their personal relationship was represented well. Awsome work. Looking forward to the next update=)

Ok I'm hooked. You're a great writer and cant wait to see whats next.

Nice story, I love it so far. I don't mean to sound rude, but you might need a beta. Maybe it's just me knit-picking, but there were some small spelling errors, nothing too big. Keep writing, it's luvverly!