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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope the rest of the week is abit easier for you. Don't stress yourselves out for our sakes, just update when you feel ready. Good luck-I know what it's like to have a crazy week with work getting in the way the whole time :)
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh too cruel. Why would you stop there???? You've got a good story here, I'm checking back all the time to see if it gets updated. And I like the way that Cat is becoming more confident
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I get on thinking you read the reviews and felt sorry for your fans but I see that you have not...PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATEEEEE...I just got off from college for a few weeks and all I want to do is spend time reading storiess sooo pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update...your breaking my heart
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fucked up lol. I was getting into it and you leave me hanging. I hate cliffy's. Please update sooon, very very soon.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK you seriously want to see a grown women cryy..please update *begging on kness* pleaseeeeeeee update ...i can't wait till next monday...i'll die by then you gotta give me something during the week pleaseee!!!!!!!! Shame on you for making this story so gooood and soooo addictive
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! You can't just leave it there and make us wait till Monday. It was a great chapter and I'm happy Azel has returned but you are so cruel! I have to know what happens nest. Hmmm...what is that suddenly appeared tattoo on his back? Please please update soon ~making puppy dog eyes~ before Monday would be nice!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. This. Story. You've done an amazing job of developing the characters and there's clearly more to Azel than you've let on thus far. I really don't know what to expect and it's sooooo cruel that you left us hanging there! I can't wait to read more and see what you've got stored up your sleeve! Keep up the good work!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I'm reviewing this so late but I've had a crazy week. Exciting action packed chapter and I you write action scenes so well. I could really visualise everything and it worked really well as a way of showing Cat's emotions. Her win wasn't unbelievable given her tactics so it made the whole scene more realistic. I'm glad that boy didn't get Wulf. I'm attached to him now!
That was really sad about Tara. I was wondering what became of her and I guess it shows how "fortunate" she was to get Azel as a master although it doesn't make the fact that she's a slave any better of course. Looking forward to the next update!
That was really sad about Tara. I was wondering what became of her and I guess it shows how "fortunate" she was to get Azel as a master although it doesn't make the fact that she's a slave any better of course. Looking forward to the next update!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this. I'm leaving town tomorrow, and I'm excited for the hope of reading the next chapter. You certainly spoil all of us, readers.
Cat is so honest and righteous.
I probably would have sent Wulf right after the stupid boy.
Or I would've ignored him because there was no way of konwing whether or not Wulf had come from his father's litter.
Can't wait for Azel to come back.
Cat is so honest and righteous.
I probably would have sent Wulf right after the stupid boy.
Or I would've ignored him because there was no way of konwing whether or not Wulf had come from his father's litter.
Can't wait for Azel to come back.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really are spoiling us with all these chapters-not that I'm complaining! Hmmm...this is such a puzzle. OK, taking Wulf as the clue is Azel not quite human like a werewolf or something with the descriptions of how Azel was feeling and changing during the ride. Also at the beginning of the story I remember you described Azel as "wolfish" a few times which I thought was just a description but was that a clue to his true nature or am I reaching?
The writing in this chapter was great. You did an impressive job setting the mood and getting into Cat and Azel's heads with next to no external dialogue. Can't wait until the next chapter.
The writing in this chapter was great. You did an impressive job setting the mood and getting into Cat and Azel's heads with next to no external dialogue. Can't wait until the next chapter.