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for War

by Kakashilover

schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update its been over a month since the last update and I really want you to finish this story!!!
person Starmix
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed recently but I've had mahjor computer troubles. About time they've finally taken their relationship to another level. This chapter should have an interesting impact on their relationship. I'm so curious about Azel's tattoo and what exactly he is.
person Ephimel
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOO! okay. I love this story. I've been glancing over it every time I come looking for a new story and finally I read it all today. What a rush. It's exciting and I can't predict what happens next which keeps me coming back for more. But I wonder. Could Cat be Azel's saving grace? Who knows!? I know you knows, and I can't wait for another chapter. Keep writing.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
YAY!
it's about time that girl got a little action.
whew! boys can be so slow sometimes... gotta take
care of your girl....
thank you BD... much needed....
nothing quite fills a certain need like a sweaty
warrior after he kills somethin... lol...
btw.. i've never beta'd before, but i could
try... i always got good grades in grammer and
whatnot when i was in school...
subhoneyhoney@yahoo.com

thx so much
-honey
person Kaytala
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another fantastic chapter. You keep showing us new sides of Azel but only really giving us a glimpse into who he really is. I'm excited to see what you have up your sleeve. Keep up the great work!
person Sonyasha
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW this story is awesome. I can't wait to read more of this please update this very soon.
Thank You!

Ja-Ne =^_^=
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I've really been missing you updating this story, but as long as everything is ok with you thats good..its means you won't neglect the story!!...thanks ahead for the update to come!!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update soon!
person Kaytala
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Can't wait for a new chapter :D I love this story!
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It seems like it has a realistic view of war and the characters are both enjoyable and lovable at the same time. You seem to know where the story is going to go and you keep me hooked throughout the entire story. the plot is good and your mistakes really aren't all that bad mechanic wise, so I'd say a really good job.

I can't wait to see the next chapter! Keep up the good work. :] this story is promising.

- Jenna