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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well things are heating up nicly for them cant wait to see what happnes next!
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice kiss!!!
I, too, prefer things to go slower... the chase is more exciting! :)
I, too, prefer things to go slower... the chase is more exciting! :)
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, she's been hurt before and she's a little cautious... I can understand her. But, the harder she denies her attraction, the harder she will fall for him... I hope she will teach him some humility, concerning women and he won't be shallow and superficial with her.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Things are starting to get exciting!!! I can't wait to see what he's willing to do to pursue her...
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story...its seems to be a little slow at first but you do have to introduce the characters...hope to read more soon :)
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good start, I like it a lot! Although, I am not much of a hockey fan, I do love skating and I'm going to keep an eye on your story. You should continue.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!! Such a good introduction!
Keep it up.
Keep it up.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. =]
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far! Great job!