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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter as always.. looks like eden amd kevin could get it om..lol
but id rather him and carly .. but oh well
PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNN
but id rather him and carly .. but oh well
PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNN
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quick and funny update, but I'm getting a bit frustrated because I don't know who to root for... Kevin or Aaron?... I will go with Carly, for now...
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad you're writting again so soon after boys and girls. this is really great so far. seems like a story i could really fall in love with. you're an awesome writter. keep up the good work and update soon please =]
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the reviews so far, guys! To born_to_do_it's comments, I'm actually very GLAD that that's the perspective right now. I don't want you guys rooting for anybody at this point! Thanks!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent introduction! I love the theme of the story and the way you described the main characters. It sounds like it's going to be a very dynamic love triangle! God, I love these... You definitely have to continue with this...
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHH, the one thing I miss about school was Dodgeball, I was kickass at it. And usually the only one left standing on the team, mostly because I was good at the dodging. It is a little weird that she got knocked unconcious by a dodgeball, those are really stuff and they make that wonderful thumping sound. Update soon, let's see how Carly and Kevin and Aaron interact with eachother.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay 2nd chapterrr
that was reallyy good
i like the whole kevin bieng jelous thingg
i hope the next chapter is where kevin n carly actually talk to each other
lol
PLEASEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATEEEEEEEEE
that was reallyy good
i like the whole kevin bieng jelous thingg
i hope the next chapter is where kevin n carly actually talk to each other
lol
PLEASEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATEEEEEEEEE
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story looks sooo good.. liked the first chapter with all the introductions
Please please please update SOONN
i lovedd alll ur stories so i am very much sure that this one will be great !
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Please please please update SOONN
i lovedd alll ur stories so i am very much sure that this one will be great !
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I like where the story is heading. Please continue with the updating.