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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, the plot thickens and gets better by every update! I too have the same questions Aaron has about Eden...
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first four chapters in one sitting, and I am loving this story. In truth, I'm not much of a Kevin fan so far. He seems arrogant and jerky, but I'm sure I'm going to see more layers in him as the story progresses. Can't wait to read more!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect Eden to invite him over for her own benifit. I thought she invited him over to help him get Carly LOL. Boy was I way off. Anywayz nice chapter, can't wait to see how he's gonna get thruough this one. XD
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... I smell troubles going their way... I don't think Carly is doing a good job trying to reunite them... she even hurt herself in the process... I'm keeping my fingers crossed for all of them.
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so she didn't get upset... not even a little bit?
Kevin might be upset... Aaron might be upset, because she wasn't upset... difficult situation...
Still, I don't think things will get any better between the boys... I hope they will, but...
Kevin might be upset... Aaron might be upset, because she wasn't upset... difficult situation...
Still, I don't think things will get any better between the boys... I hope they will, but...
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol he paid him t be her friend? Haha...kids....
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review, ecstatic. No, Carly wasn't upset. I'm sorry it wasn't very clear in the story :)
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, i was suprised when he said that he paid kevin 2 b friends with carly
by the way at the end was carly upset or not (it seemed she wasnt) ?
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATEE SOOOOONNNNN
by the way at the end was carly upset or not (it seemed she wasnt) ?
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATEE SOOOOONNNNN
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story sounds kool so far. please continue.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way this story is going... perfect!