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for The Trouble With Three

by Jaded1004

schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, Carly is about to choose Aaron. I hope she sticks to her choice though. I sense great troubles going her way... I, myself, still cannot decide between the two guys... My heart goes out to Eden...
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit both of them kiss her back-to-back. Carly's probably feeling a double dose of confusion going on. Nice chapter.
person coolboy1
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOWWWW THAT’S WAS WELL GOOD, I LIKE EDENS POINT OF VIEW AND WOULD LIKE TO SEE IT A BIT MORE
PLEASE UPDATE SOOONN
xxxxxxx
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Eden, it is so unfair for her and I hope you put a guy for her in here. This whole story I have wanted carley to be with aaron so i am happy things seem to be turning in that direction.
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great story! I spend most of the time flip flopping on who Carly should get with! LOL More please
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope she ends up with Aaron.
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm here! :)
Instead of feeling for Carly, I started feeling for Eden... I found Carly to be quite naive towards the whole situation... she really cannot believe that everything will be alright after all this! Still though, I wouldn't want to be in her shoes...
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh snap Aaron finally made a bold move, although that might not have been the right one to make at that time. Nice chapter.
person coolboy1
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW I CNT BELIVE AARON KISSED CARLY..
I WLD HAV BEEN A DILEMA IF KEVIN HAD SEEN THEM LOL
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN
person coolboy1
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lIKE HOW THE STORIES GOING
PLEASE CAN U MAKE THE NEXT CHApta ABOUT THE DANCEE
THAT SHOULD BE INTERESTING]
PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!