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for The Trouble With Three

by Jaded1004

person nesl247
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In case you get emails for each of these reviews, and you see this one, can you please let us know if you ever plan on continuing this story? I've been waiting nearly 3 years for it...
person doloris
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. I hope you can update real soon!!
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I never imagined Eden and Kevin having sex, although at the beginning I thought they would use each other to make Aaron and Carly jealous... I fear they will both regret their night together and they will end up hurting themselves and Carly and Aaron... or... it could work very well for them at the end. :)
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit. I didn't think they'd actually go through with it....at least not yet. I thought Eden & Kev would get together after Kev finds out Aaron and Carly are together. I totally didn't expect this...
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. Some how I saw it coming. Now when is she going to tell Kevin that he wasn't the one she wanted.
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw fuck you're going to end it there!?!?! AHH, hurry with the next chapter please!!!
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its getting... I think Aaron+Carley Kevin+Ed(names are not my strong point) and how dare you leave it like that you're just evil!
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Err... are these guys bi-polar or something? I think i'm just as confused as Carly is.
I've never read a 'love triangle' story before, so it's kinda strange,
but I like it so far. Keep up the *as usual* great work ^^
--Radgar
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is one very evil cliffie!!! How could you do this to me? Now, I'm dying to know what happens to Eden and what happens with Carly and Aaron... you have to update fast now... it's 45 Celsius here today and I'm practically melting... feel sorry for me and update soon... *puppy eyes*
person coolboy1
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was soo good.. please can u continue from therer
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON